Book 2 Chapter 1 (oh and some book 1 news too)

The rough draft is moving forward nicely.  I had fun with the first scene of the first chapter.  It sure is rough, but it’s enjoyable.  I took a gamble with it too, but I think it’s going to pay off in the end.

Oh… and it looks like I might have the cover finalized inside the next 2 days which would be fantastic because then I can have the pre-order up even EARLIER!  WOOT WOOT!  That also means I will be sharing the book cover as soon as I can get it up for you all to enjoy.  At least I’m going to link to where it is located so WordPress won’t take it for their own uses.  Sorry.  Watch for Wattpad  (BTW, we’re up to chapter 6 there now)

So, get ready reviewers, Amazon will be ready to take the reviews shortly… and any place else you want to talk about the book.  Consider this the final lap flag.

Also, if you want to help support me and my book by a purchase, buying the book any time during the pre-order or on the day of release is the most helpful.  It’s very much like opening weekend for a movie.  That opening weekend sets the tone for all weeks that follow.  Very few movies end up like Titanic where it started okay and built into a phenomenon for weeks and weeks like a top 40 song.

So keep that in mind if you’re thinking about it.

Anyway, 3300 words in to C1B2.

I am a happy boy.

 

Book Two Has Begun! (and other news)

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The first 1200 words in the first draft from Book 2 of the Akiniwazi Saga have been put down.  How much of this will remain at the end?  I don’t know because frankly I’m trying to feel this out still.  I know where I have to get to and what I want to accomplish in this scene, but, it must be worked out.  Some significant changes have already happened in the last 36 hours on what I want to write and how certain characters are going to be, but, hey… we shall see how it will go.

I expect writing to go kind of slow for a while, but I have a personal goal in mind.  I do expect this book to be longer than book 1 and possibly book 3, and it may cause some fun rewrites in book 3 (which the first draft is already done).

In other stuff…

I’m toying with what movie to review with The Breakers #4.  I just watched Suicide Squad and am personally desiring to break down that film… but I feel like I am going to be unfair to it because it got poisoned in my mind before I watched it, and honestly, I can’t say that the bad rap it got was unfair in some ways, but very unfair in others.  I dunno.  What I will probably do is wait till I purchase it (yes I will still purchase a Blu Ray version if I can get it for somewhere around 5 bucks) before I review it.  Which means I will probably do my first choice, my second favorite film of all time:

“Emperor of the North Pole”

Now a little teaser trivia here.  It was retitled “Emperor of the North” much to my indignation because… in the words of Pete from “Oh Brother!”, “That don’t make no sense!”

Emperor of the North Pole was an expression among hobos in the 1930’s to say someone was powerless, or ruled nothing.  It’s really a stunning “lost” movie most people never knew and…. well I talked myself into it.  Be watching for it soon.  Till then…

Restraint and Patience are Difficult

I received my first draft of the cover.

I’m a very happy boy!  I so want to share this right away, but I have to wait till we get some minor tuning things figured out.  I can tell you this much.  I chose well for the artist.  It hearkens back to the old school game book covers that I used to love like you’d find on the old AD&D hardcovers.  Very classic, but with a fresh modern edge that works extremely well.  May not be something a lot of proper Christians expect or like on the cover of one of their books, but, well, it is perfect for nerds into fantasy.

I can’t wait to show, and we may have it sooner than I had hoped, so… yippie!

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Day of Reckoning

That’s right.  We have an official release date.

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“A Light Rises in a Dark World” will be available for purchase on:

February 17th, 2017

I am going to be setting up pre-orders soon.  I cannot have it set yet, since I am still waiting on the cover.  It should be done on or before the 12th, allowing at least one week for pre order through Amazon and other sites like Kobo and Smashwords.  This is only for the e-book release.  The print book release is going to be done in May.  (And if God smiles down, Book 2 will be coming out shortly after that for summer reading at the beach/cabin/pool).  So hopefully this will be a full, fun year!

To clarify, there is an importance to pre-orders, just so you know.  In fact, this is where all the importance of reviews and purchases matters.  Your decision to purchase my book over the first 24 hours can make the difference of entering the water like an Olympic diver (no splash) or your big Uncle Carl doing a belly flop off the high dive (refill the pool).  Therefore, your best support is three fold:

  1. Order/buy your book during the pre-order period, or in the first 24 hours.  This is of course the best way to support me.
  2. Leave a Review if you have been given a review copy.
  3. Tell everyone!  Spread the word on social media or if you know someone this book would be good for, let them know it’s out there.

Once I have the cover nailed down and things in place for setting the pre-order, I will know more and will continue to provide details of what’s happening.

Till then, we’re up to Chapter 4 on Wattpad for those looking for a free sample.  More chapters coming every 2-4 days till release, so keep checking!

Oh… and thank you all for your support!

The Breakers: Blade Runner

Oh yes… you knew this was coming if you’ve been watching my blog.  My all time favorite film.

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Luv me some River Song.

So I finally dissected Blade Runner with the Hero’s Journey and had a fun time doing it.  I also am doing a little different setup, because I broke it down by time when these steps began to my estimation in the movie.  Now when you watch it again, you will be able to follow right along.

Now, a personal taste note.  I have the Unrated version, the “Directors Cut” and the “Final Cut”.  I plan to get some freaky box set of the movie on BluRay when I get the chance.  This article was done watching the Final Cut, which is excellent in many ways.  Particularly with the cleaned up special effects, which barely needed it, but also the use of the ambiguous ending and included stock unicorn footage from Legend which Ridley Scott added in to give a huge level of ambiguity.  Generally I love this edit… but…

I like the monologue and the original “I want more life, F****r.” line… NOT Father.  More about that later.  Let’s begin

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First off, this is a film noir trope twist set in a cyberpunk future.  It’s really the first of its kind.  Many have tried to follow after it, some successfully but most… not so much.

12. Status Quo

Yes, we start with the top of the clock.  The world is set up brilliantly during the opening credits.  First with the opening crawl with the blah blah blah of what the world is.  But then FOOM!  Volcanic eruption on flame showing the bleak world and we slowly pass through this strange city of “Los Angeles” to the Tyrell Arcology where Leon has a bad job interview and puts four pills into the Blade Runner, Holden.  This blends rather seamlessly in to the Call to Adventure, so the two layer onto each other with Deckard’s “arrest” by Gaff and trip to the police station to see Capt. Bryant.

Cinematically brilliant.  This is where movies catch a break when it comes to exposition.  If you do it well, you can get away with what is essentially 5 pages of describing the world in a manner that could technically be really boring.  Another movie that gets this right is the remake of “Appleseed” where Deunan is brought to Olympus.  I may have to take a gander at that movie next.  Hmmmm?

Now comes the stylistic debate.  Voiceover, or no?  I like the trope of a good voice over.  I know that Harrison Ford had to be all but forced at gunpoint to do it, it’s a great trope.  I know Ridley Scott said the studio did it because “American audiences are believed to be too stupid”, but it’s also expected.  Some of the lines were… meh… but it added that wonderful film noir feel you can really enjoy if you let yourself fall into the style of the tropes.  But, does it hurt the film if it’s cut out?  Not in any way that’s substantial.

1. Call to Adventure

Some may say that Capt Bryant forcing Deckard to do one last mission is the real call to adventure, but I maintain that its really the Assistance.  Gaff forcibly pulling Deckard from the Noodle vendor is where our hero is irrevocably yanked from his life and dropped into the mess.  He makes one futile attempt to avoid the call when he argues with Bryant, but that feeble slap quickly blurs into the second step.

This goes to show that resisting the call can be feeble and still effective, and build on the Status Quo.  Here is one area where the voice over adds some great depth but does it in what I’d call a blah way by talking about Bryant’s racism.  We get a good feel for it with all the excellent acting.  I really appreciate how understated acting of M. Emmet Walsh plays out.  He never gets too over the top and shows that menace can be subtextual and brilliantly effective.  Once presented with no choice for threat of retribution we go to…

2 Assistance

Deckard is given his best tool: information.  Not only does it continue to feed the Status Quo, it is entertainingly done and snaps hard with the high contrast feel of the film noir tropes.  Two men talking with each other by talking around each other in some regards.  Detailed exposition is given out with the eyedropper of dialogue.

But Bryant also gives a nice twist to the whole assistance section by subverting… lightly a “Grill the suspect” trope.  Sending Deckard over to get more help from the Tyrell corporation and getting toyed with by Dr. Tyrell with his new production model was ingenious, plus it introduced us to a huge pillar of the world: The Voight-Kampf test.  Information leaks out about the world even more, plus the stunning visuals, the introduction of the Femme Fatale in the form of Rachel, and the creepy/crazy little scientist.  The layering on this part of the Hero’s Journey is fantastic.

Because then you have a mirror image of assistance in Roy’s interrogation of Lu Chen with Leon.  (James Hong is one of my personal all time favorite character actors, so I’m biased there)  Again, you get subtext and connection to illuminate more about the antagonists going up against Deckard.  Roy is a perfect vaudevillian…no… Shakespearian counterpart to Deckard’s amiable aping of Humphrey Bogart.  You need this level of high fallutin’ artistic menace to something as plebian as a burnt out retired cop.  The juxtaposition of the characters just works.  Even the dull, thudding threat of Brion James’s Leon is a great frame for Rutgar Hauer’s fantastic job creating a pathos ridden Roy, seeking a very good MacGuffin: the desire for more life.  I mean come ON!  How awesome is that?  This guy’s got such a distinctive goal.  He just wants to live longer and now Deckard is set in motion to cut his already short life even shorter.  Mind you, this technically occurs a little later after Deckard’s searching of his hotel room, this is all braided together so it belongs here thematically.  ***Note: IMDB lists the character name as Hannibal Chew for James Hong.  Horsecrap.  He’s called Lu Chen in the movie by Roy.  So I don’t know what they’re thinking.

Ahhh but we can’t forget the last layer of assistance: J.F. Sebastian.. discovered by Pris, who then gives us another glimpse into a rather unpleasant aspect of society.  Only the physically prized people and slaves are sent off world.  Earth is left with the dregs.

3. Departure

With everyone now set on their courses, collisions are seen on the horizon, but first we get a near miss as Deckard investigates Leon’s hotel room looking for clues.  This  is actually a lot more complex in this too, because Deckard “departs” in multiple ways.  First his investigation gets underway as he finds the sequin and the snake scale in the tub plus Leon’s photos.  All this done under the watchful eye of Gaff, plus Leon shown outside on the wet street looking up knowing he cannot go back for what HE prizes: his memories.  This gives him an extra oomph when he plays the heavy to Roy’s interrogation of Lu Chen.

When Rachel confronts Deckard about her Voight Kampf test you see an internal departure.  No longer is Deckard separate from his work, he’s re-integrated and she is nothing more than a machine.  A very complex, hard to understand machine.  This is his emotional departure as he puts on the hard detatchment required for him to do the job.  Rachel on the other hand is undergoing so much turmoil from being essentially cast aside by her creator.  This is one area where the script is not really clear why Tyrell did this unless it is to imply she failed so he threw her away, or that he did it to complicate the situation the police were facing for… reasons.  That said, Rachel endures her own departure echo as being thrown out from paradise.

The Unicorn Dream also begins to create the unreliable narrator.  Is Deckard a replicant or not.  Now recent conversations with Ridley Scott say he is, old interviews with Harrison Ford say he wasn’t.  Others say, Ridley also might have manipulated Ford into thinking that for the sake of getting a better performance.  The scene still is an exemplification of a spiritual departure.  Deckard must now look at the nature of his own existence on some level.

4. Trials (Begins 0:43)

The Photograph search is a puzzle trial.  Simple, but intriguing.  Although film would never have that much detail available, it is still brilliant to watch and see the wheels turn.  This is a scene that would have been impossible to do in almost any printed media.  Comics could have taken a shot, but come far short.  The puzzle, once solved gives a clue on where to look next and that’s the night bazaar.  To this day I love the idea of a street corner stall electron microscope.  I find that hilarious.  What kind of a world do we live in where such precision technology could be reduced to that degree of commercialism?  Goes to enrich the status quo and give us the next trickle of information.  Also, this is the third time we see reinforcement that the Earth’s eco-system is dying.  A theme that was strong in the novel “Do Androids Dream of Electric Sheep” but largely non-existent in the movie save as a flavoring.

The trials take us on a very typical Film Noir trope of ‘chasing the clues’.  We also get a tip of the hat to Film Noir classic “Casablanca” with Deckard showing up at Taffy Lewis’s which has an erotic stage show and seems very much cabaret inspired. (Side note, I love the champagne glass in which Deckard gets a free drink.  I don’t know why, but I find them beautiful).  Taffy Lewis is a wonderful sleezeball bar owner of nefarious implications.  Even in his short bit of screen time he sets the tone well.  This really brings out why even toss off characters can be powerful in setting your scenes.  Never underestimate the power of a bit player to make a scene something special is my takeaway here.

Interrogating a second Femme Fatale, Zorah, was masterful acting, but also a well developed scene.  From the “waiting at the stage door” trope to the “narrowly escaping sexy death” subtleties line up the clues and do the storytelling while the conversation is under the repartee of Deckard and Zorah that unto itself is riotous.  Then we get the iconic chase scene through the mass of humanity.  It tells us a lot about Deckard as well as the desperation of the replicants in general.  Zorah is so desperate to get away, she goes out half naked, completely inappropriate hoping that the mass of humanity would hide her even in that provocative outfit.  Deckard is also very careful in his shots, showing he is trying to take care not to harm an innocent.

And after all that, we get the last big trial for Deckard: Surviving Leon.  Although the cops did not notice either Leon or Rachel who witnessed Zorah’s death from the way the scene plays out, it creates a “hero at the mercy of the villian” scene when Deckard cannot defeat Leon, but can protect his bottle of booze.  I have a soft spot for Leon for a personal reason I’d never reveal online so, this is such a fun scene for me.  Plus his iconic “Wake up!  Time to die” line, I mean just perfect.  I even forgive the Deus Ex Rachel part of it, because it sets up so much and is quite appropriate.  For those who wonder why Rachel was even there?  It was set up by the vid-phone call.  She changed her mind and came down to see what Deckard wanted, the police were all over the place, and found him in the center.  Leon shows up interrupting her talking to him till she puts a bullet through Leon’s head with Deckard’s gun

5. Approach (Begins 1:03)

Roy and Pris meet up and J.F. figures out who they are.  This begins the final approach of Roy to his goal, Dr. Tyrell in an effort to get more life.  The scenes here are good because it sets up more the character of Roy and Pris, and J.F. is the gatekeeper to their goal.  They must seduce him to gain access and do so in a manner that is charming.  They appeal to his ego, playing both the amazing creation in action and lost children.  “We’re so happy you found us.” is Roy’s clever lie to paint themselves as lost waifs that need his protection.  They then get the key to access: J.F. and Tyrell’s chess game which Roy is good at playing.

With his bell being rung, and both shaken up over two deaths, Deckard and Rachel bond.  This is more or less a trial of the spirit for the two as both realize their feelings for each other are forbidden, but also that Deckard has more clear understanding of what is going on.  Rachel, after something that too many nowadays would call ‘rape’ not seduction, gives in to her own feelings.  It’s a very film noir trope again,  (I told you it was film noir.) as the detective falls for the dangerous femme fatale and vice versa.  Watch “The Big Sleep” or “Dark Passage” sometime and see how that works.  You’ll shake your head.  This sets up the approach to escape in a way, but is also necessary to push Deckard on to finish the job fast so he can get out of the limbo he is trapped in.

Deckard kills Pris enraging Roy (Desync- Begins 1:28)  Now for an oddity.  The last step to the final crisis: aka conflict with Roy Batty, Deckard fights Pris.  She is Roy’s gatekeeper.  Tipped off that trouble is coming by the fake phonecall following Tyrell and J.F.’s death in the Tyrell building by Roy (this is why it’s a de-sync) Pris readies for Deckard and becomes the most dangerous challenge and sets the stage and tone for the final battle.  It is one of the most bizarre fights I’ve ever seen.  Darryl Hanna is great.  She’s playing essentially a super strong prostitute, so it makes sense that her moves and actions are almost more artsy, dance-like and flailing than a trained fighter.  We also learn that Deckard is not a fist-fighter, but a gunslinger.  Without his gun, he’s pretty much useless.  Something that becomes a big deal.  But, once Pris dies… rather horrifically IMHO… it leaves the viewer almost shattered at the end of the sequence.  Dat scream, yo?  And it serves as the signal that Roy’s home from what he’s just been up to, which is his OWN crisis.

6. Crisis (Begins 1:20)

First off, it’s “I want more life, fucker!”.  Not “father”.  Why?  The power of that one statement is so complex with the curse word.  You already know he is coming to see his de facto father.  Long been established with the subtleties of the film.  He does not need to hammer it home.  What makes this complex and nuance by the cussing is this points out the same problems an abused child has.  They love the parent, but they hate them at the same time.  It makes the murder so much more powerful when you take it all into effect and pour on that very weird kiss to which I give HUGE credit to Joe Turkel and Rutger Hauer for making it both believable, creepy and completely appropriate for the scene.

Even though the death of J.F. occurs off screen, it is none the less powerful as J.F.’s brief flight from someone he thought was his friend becomes his doom.  Then to watch Roy Batty descend in the elevator showing the conflict on his face as to what he’d done is so powerful… Not to mention Vangelis pulling out all the orchestral stops for the first time in the movie… yeah… nails it.  Tour de Force climax that a writer could only hope to put into a book.

Now we resync everything together.  Roy’s climax is done.  His Macguffin is forever lost and his tragedy nears his completion.  He returns to find his lover dead, and the man sent to kill him hiding somewhere inside.  But Roy is better than Deckard in every way, except he lacks a gun.  The great leveler, we see Roy needing to counter the old American addage “God made man, Sam Colt made all men equal”.  He does this brilliantly, by taunting Deckard into a shaking mess then going through a wall to disable Deckard making the gun nearly useless to him.

Here is where Deckard’s climax goes to 11.  A gunslinger who can’t shoot against a trained killer who’s already killed 3 people in the film and implied to have killed many many more is after him… and he made that guy mad.  On a positive note, Roy wants him to suffer like he is suffering, as well as realizing this is his swan song.  Deckard is just trying to get out of this alive at this point.  No other thought is driving him.  Time after time, Roy gets in Deckard’s face, taunting him and threatening him, but never tries to kill him.  It is as if the torture of the ordeal is enough.  He’s enjoying it on some level, but he’s also trying to drive a point home to someone who essentially represents the Grim Reaper come for him.

In many regards, this turns the climax on its head in this light.  We view the whole thing through Deckard’s eyes.  Roy is this unstoppable monster that has taken away his ability to defend himself, or do his job and now seems to want his life in revenge.  He and we as the audience are freaking out because we don’t know when that deathblow is going to fall, and Deckard climbs and climbs and runs and runs through the ruin of the building which stands in for the ruin of the world till he reaches the top and becomes trapped.  So frantic to escape, Deckard throws himself across the gap hoping to make an escape, and fails.

7. Treasure (Begins 1:44)

The real “all is lost” moment and “in praise of the villain” speech are rolled together.  Not only that, it is the scene of victory and Treasure for Roy more than it is for Deckard.  This is some serious tangling of tropes and throws the definition for ‘what is success’ out the window.

Roy give his own eulogy here as he watches Deckard dangle.  He luxuriates in the power he holds over a man he can save instantly or just watch drop with the satisfaction he avenged not only Pris, but Leon and Zorah too.  Waxing rhapsodic, you see Deckard is completely beyond hearing anything that Roy is saying.  Gravity has a way of focusing one’s priorities and his priority is to just not die.  So who is Roy talking to?  The audience really, in one of the best monologues captured on film.  But in context of the story, he is talking to himself.  He’s taking stock of his short life and realizing he has seen and done incredible things.  By the end of his speech and Deckard’s near fall, it catalyzes his love of life and expands it from the selfish to a universal.  Deckard rightly points out that in his final moments, all the things that had upset him, he realized time was unimportant and only life was important (see what I did there?  😛 ).  It gives him a peace so profound he not only accepts his fate, he transcends it.

Deckard on the other hand is stuck with a more mundane treasure.  He gets to live and return to the life he had of a burnt out retired cop.  All the high concept, spiritual epiphanies of Roy Batty washed away just like the tears in rain (an ad libbed line BTW) as he tried to comprehend what happened while he was focused on not dying.  Although Deckard is not just given his life back, he is given one big wrinkle too as his reward.

 

8. Result (Begins 1.46)  9. Return (Begins 1:48)  10. New Life (Begins 1:51)

Now here’s one spot where the story gets a little weak IMHO.  Why did not Gaff do his job and kill Rachel… in Deckard’s bed… while she was asleep?  He had the chance.  The origami unicorn confirms it.  But now, since he cannot allow Rachel to be killed, part of the Treasure is that he now must run from the law as Rachel is now an illegal replicant.  His new life begins as that of an outlaw.  But he does it together with a new love and new outlook on life.  He heard a little of Roy Batty’s ramblings in his death throes.

As the viewer, we’re given the extra treasure that  the ambiguous ending allows us to have.  Is Deckard a replicant?  How long will either live?  (Which if you had the voice over, you’d know… no incept date so no lifespan limiter.)  It’s one of the few times the ‘happy ending’ was kinda good because it was not purely a happy ending and the voiceover was perfect.  Another note on the voice over… having Ford being so resistant to it added to the attitude of a burnt out cop even moreso.

The finale hits all the tropes for a Film Noir ending.  “Detective Gets Girl”, the “Cops get the Right Man”, “Running away to an uncertain future”… all of it’s there so that makes one helluva satisfying payoff, with the happy or ambiguous ending.

Squeeeeeeee!

 

 

Sampler Platter #4 “For the Greatest Good, They Leave Home”

Chapter 4 is now posted for your reading pleasure.  Please feel free to drop by and leave comments.

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Sanitized For Your Protection?

With the book in final review stage, waiting on the cover to go, I’ve been picking at it, finding little stray hairs of errors and cleaning up the glossary of things I should have caught long before.   Then, I had something come to light that forced me to look hard at my creation.

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The Prodigal Son by James Tissiot

One of my reviewers, whom I thank for taking up the task, let me know that the book was inappropriate because of something that happened in it.  Now I bring this up not to bash, nor to seek to shame or take to task, but to help myself and others understand my work.  I keep the book relatively clean.  There are only a couple points where the language gets ‘blue’, but there apparently is one thing in here that someone found unforgivable.  It was put to me the challenge of whether or not I should remove the phrase from the book to make it ‘safe for a Christian audience’.  That caused me to think about it over the course of a day on what was the purpose of the use of the offensive/blasphemous oath.

I asked myself about the phrase.  Was it gratuitous or unnecessary?  No to both.  What the phrase did was set the tone for the kind of environment the characters were about to enter.  It was not a completely safe place and not everyone there were good citizens or Christians.  They were complex fallible people who sinned, but also gives a hint to several things deeper in the future and serves as a warning sign to the reader that not everything is as it seems.  Yes the phrase is blasphemous if you want to strictly adhere to the law violating taking God’s name in vain.  Something that we in modern times are often guilty of dozens if not hundreds of times a day.  But for a sailor in the 16th century… this is right in line with the speech and attitude many had despite being a faithful person.

What I then realized is that the reviewer’s statement was not going to be uncommon.  There will be thousands if not tens of thousands of Christian readers who will see this one statement get very offended and ban the book from their own libraries and possibly others.  I was heartbroken about this realization.  I did not foresee it.  But I also saw the solution.  Remove or soften the phrase.  Now, I’ve done this once before already, and I’m still troubled by it being the right choice.  Is leaving this phrase in the book a hill I want to die on?

I finally realized yes.  It is going to stay and here is why.

Although I want this book to be edifying and uplifting to Christians, they are not my target audience.  It is not primarily for legalists and purists of the faith.  I will be ecstatic if they read the book, get something out of it and love it none the less.  I really hope they do.  If my beta readers and some of my reviewers are good indicators, this will be the case.

The main audience I hope to gain with this book is not just nerdy Christians who have been in the faith all their lives and have never been outside God’s grace like I had been.  This is a book aimed at nerds who have never been exposed to Christianity in this way.  Who don’t want to be preached to.  Those who do not want to hear a sermon and talked down to like they are the sinner and must be saved.  I think I accomplished that even though the characters in it live their faith out loud.  You are talking a monk dealing with ecclesiastical problems who is being punished by his superiors for failing to toe the line and is caught in a crux of the plans of others.

I want those people to find a book that is entertaining… scratch that… I want them to be THRILLED by the book!  I want those Christians who are slipping or doubting their faith or wondering if they are good enough for God to be encouraged by what they find.  I want them to see characters who are not perfect Christians and fail and sin and are hot messes but God loves them and is with them inspite of themselves, while others who seem pious and in God’s good graces to have to take a step back and realize that is not all sunshine they’re standing in.

I want them to the little heresies of life to be evident, because it might inspire someone to look at their lives in a new way.  Under all the entertainment, that is what I want them to find if they look for it.  I want those who have never seen Christianity in the same ‘cool’ lighting and stagecraft before like we so often see paganism, pantheism, atheism and other occult philosophies.  How often have we read fantasy novels or even Sci Fi novels that are chock full of “ancient weapons and hokey religions” and nobody blinks an eye at it being preached and praised?  That’s what I am doing with Christianity.  “Azeroth Metrion Xinthos…” see nobody bats an eye at something that although made up, it stands in for praise of something occult when you boil everything away.  Change that to “In the name of Jesus, demon come out!” and you get the point.

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This also speaks to the other reason I am leaving the blasphemous oath in.  I have a hard time reading most Christian fiction because everything seems to be… sanitized.  Even the villains seem to be only Disney Channel level of menace.  Even demons seem that way at times, but people are sanitized the most.  Nothing that could besmirch the squeaky clean image of the Mouse is there.  A lacquered Jesus that doesn’t even get dusty.  Never do we see the real challenging aspects of faith in a mud and blood spattered mess that is mankind.  I mean even JRR Tolkien is grittier than them and he never cusses or deals deeply about crisis of faith in any of his books, but the people there feel more real than the glossy clean brand image you’d expect with people’s Easter Sunday behavior.  This is what I hope to avoid as a writer, because I want these characters you root for to be relatable because they walked in situations like you have and do on a daily basis sometimes because being a faithful Christian can be hard and we fail over and over again, which necessitates God’s forgiveness more and more.

On the other hand, you can completely gloss over the Christianity and just treat it from a historical POV slapped into a fantasy setting like you would if you watched the movie “Kingdom of Heaven” or “The Name of the Rose” (Nobody but crazy literary people and scholars actually read Umberto Eco do they?  I love the movie though!)  The rest you can treat as typical low/historical fantasy with heavy steampunk elements thrown in on top.  Nobody will fault you for it and honestly, if you don’t care about the spiritual stuff, just enjoy the story.  So I pray what I put together actually stands up that way and does not rely on faith and sermonizing to work.  It’s part of the setting and historical context, but I don’t want anyone to feel like I’m evangelizing them deliberately.

That means I now realize even more than ever this book is in God’s hands.  Hell, this whole SERIES will be in His hands!  He’s gonna do with it as He sees fit.  But then again, when doesn’t He?  ;c)

Lastly, I also realized two things that form a viscous worrisome stew in my head.

1. I realized that if this book somehow only ends up on the shelves or pages of Christian Bookstores or online retailers, I will have failed in my mission to deliver something good for nerds and fantasy geeks.  I will have missed my intended audience and gotten my secondary one.  That’s not bad, mind you, but it will go against my hopes.  And I refer back to “God’s gonna God”.

2. I’m probably going to get hate mail from multiple sides over religious purists who will not like my handling of the faith, spiritual warfare or history, despite this is a fantasy and fantasy twist that comes from a historical basis.  It is biased to my understanding and is not perfect as theologians may say.  In fact, I deliberately have mistakes in it because it’s part of the setting and/or based on historical precedents of the medieval Catholic Church and monastic system.  This will piss off legalists who will come up with a laundry list of reasons to hate this.  Ultimately I will unashamedly refer to “It’s fantasy and welcome to the liberal use of Handwavium.” if I must.

But you know what?  I am going to have to learn to deal with it.  I wrote all this because I really felt it appropriate in the book itself.  This novel is what I felt God wanted me to write, and so I’m going to do it the way my understanding guides me and let see what happens.

Just like I cannot pick my fans (thanks artists who demanded Ivanka Trump remove their art from her walls for teaching me that… but did not offer to buy it back.)  I just need to say, “Thank you.  I am grateful that you love my work.” and respect the fact that I touched someone I didn’t intend.  But God knows what He’s doing, and that is what I’m going to have to rely on.

Thank you for reading.

 

Sampler Platter

As a run up to the release of the book, I am offering out a significant teaser.  A new chapter will be released every 2-4 days up to 11 chapters total.  If that isn’t a good incentive to go check it out over on Wattpad, I don’t know what is.  🙂

A Light Rises in a Dark World– Free Sample!

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Childhood’s End

When God is kind enough to remind us of the small fleeting things that matter most. Well said my friend. Well said.

The Quantum Camera Series

Today, I did something for my youngest son that I have never done for any of my children. I have not done this because the idea popped into my head while I was at work today.

I took him out to dinner on his birthday.

We have celebrations and family meals but tonight, it was just me and my nine year old. No tech devices, no agenda … just hanging out.chick-fil-a-340x158

He initially wanted to go to McDonald’s but he confessed his real desire was to go to a fast
food place with a play area.

We ended up at Chick-fil-A.

We stood back from the line to decide what we would order and I let him go first and tell the nice cashier what he would like to have for his meal. He was a little nervous but he got his order out like a little gentleman.

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Positive/Negative: Interweb games

So good news, irritating news I guess is the best way to describe it.

Good News!

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My cover is in the process of being done.  Agreed to a budget with a talented artist who has done other fantasy books, and it could be ready in as quick as a week.  Woot woot!

This also means my early deadline for the book release WILL be met if nothing goes wrong.  So I’m looking for the middle of February sometime around Valentine’s Day.

Irritating News!

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I just learned that WordPress gets rights to everything I publish, modify and more when I post here… so I won’t be putting any more writing on this blog.  I will have to link people to a place that protects my rights and property, so expect some changes to come here soon. 😦  Sorry, but I don’t feel like giving free, worldwide, non-exclusive rights to my creative stuff I am trying to sell like that.  No offense WordPress, but I feel like that needs to be a little more clear in the TOS and easier to find.  Still gonna blog though.

And that means I’m going to have to start working at getting my mailing list set up officially so I can store and control what I want to give out and to whom and who owns it.  So…. yaaaayyy!  sorta.

So on that note… I am putting up some of my book on Wattpad instead.  I’ll link it here, but that’s where you’ll find it.  I plan to release a larger portion of my novel here for free review.  Sort of the extended Amazon teaser.

https://www.wattpad.com/story/96195973-a-dark-light-rises-in-a-dark-world

 

Enjoy!